Friday 17 August 2007

some-thing diffrant revised


Young lovers stroll along holding hands, the sun shines brightly .
laughter and smiles as they take in the goodness of the countryside.
T shirts and jeans are the order of the day,the sweet smell of deodorant
masks the perspiration, leaving the road they follow the path towards
the woodlands a field or two away, all troubles so far from their minds.
Blackberries are picked and fed to each other as birds fly over head,
bales of hay lay semi stacked looking like arm chairs made for giants .
Laying back on tightly packed blocks of grass staring at blue skies,
making up stories from the shapes of the clouds high up in the sky.

Giggles from tickles and teasing, turns to kissing and so natures reality
kicks in, his hands inside her T shirt gentle teases her breast
she quivers as their lips meet, his hair becomes wet as the sun beats down
across his neck.__The heat is on as she fumbles with his zip.
His hand moves caressingly towards her belly,her body shudders
feeling a shadow pass across her face,she pushes him away my god were
being watched,quickly he pulls at his zip catching some hair,
hello! Ben she says brushing down her clothes, Ben wags his tail and
runs away to his master on the far side of the field,
who might have been unaware that they were there.
The lusting now passes standing up they stroll away. Be it that he's wiping his eyes something wrong she asks, no no just dust he replies.

8 comments:

polona said...

oh... this is an excellent and titillating story.

fotoface said...

POLONA
THANK YOU VERY MUCH
just had to try something else, for a change.

Wanda said...

I guess you did try something else. From birds singing splish splash, I was taking a bath to making whoopie in the hay....I had to check and see whose blog I was reading....Wow, Mr. Foto...you have a hot fountain pen!

fotoface said...

big thank you
wanda
its not mills&boon and i guess
maybe i should write more .
but would i loose my cyber friends?

Nina said...

Goodness! I was hooked already on your site(s), you didn't have to go and show off like this. ;)

fotoface said...

nina
oh dear I don't know what to say
should it be sorry , or humm!!
please reply
thanks

Nina said...

Hee-hee, I'm teasing! It's a great story; it tells the tale so well in so few lines. Really nice the way you are able to invoke...a sense of familiar intimacy.

:)

fotoface said...

nina
you put my mind at rest
thank you xx

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